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Dancing In Heaven
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Dancing In Heaven |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
My mind reflects upon you often I always wonder where you are. Are you dancing up in heaven? Perhaps you're resting on a star. Did the heavens open wide And welcome you with open arms? You're now on the other side Sharing all your special charms. Was it everything that you hoped for, And thought that it would be? As you stepped through those heavenly doors, Was there beauty as far as you could see? You're missed so much by everyone, But there's comfort knowing where you are. Are you dancing up in heaven Or are you resting on a star? |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Such a wonderful thought... "Are you dancing up in heaven Or are you resting on a star?" Lovely work Eloise. |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
How lovely, brought me memories of loved ones passed, thankyou Julie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ This is so tenderly beautiful~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very uplifting write!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Thank you all very much. I just lost a very dear friend this past week so I just wanted to write something for her. |
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jackiej Junior Member
since 2006-01-21
Posts 12USA |
This poem really touched my heart, I could feel your love for your friend. I'm sorry for your temporary loss, because you will find your friend again either dancing in Heaven waiting for you to do some steps or sitting on a star, waiting for you to recite some of your deep poetry...and of course this will take place many, many and many years from now after you complete your destiny on earth. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
A very beautiful poem!! Thanks for sharing. Hugs, Ethel |
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LifeSinger Junior Member
since 2006-01-15
Posts 25Kentucky, USA |
This reminds me of a friend i lost this past year, and that he's always watchin me in heaven. Beutiful, thank you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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