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bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN
0 posted 2006-04-07 01:01 AM


How could I fall in love this soon?
no lover moon at all...

oh,


I understand that anyone can fall:

down stairs
out  windows

and,

"rent a trucks"
was just  my luck

until

the night-time brings

those stings
of heart,
and wings me

cross the sea

where

my love sleeps...and dreams

of me.
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curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
1 posted 2006-04-07 03:58 AM

this is lovely bubbleseleave just lovely.
curiouse
passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2006-04-07 02:35 PM

had to laugh at the falling down stairs and out windows part

I'm more careful now

good write, very cool
bubblesleave
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since 2006-03-04
Posts 197
Bloomington, IN
3 posted 2006-04-08 01:03 AM

Thanks All!
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