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StevenS
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0 posted 2006-04-03 11:11 AM



Ken

I think about him now and then,
at Christmas time or when it rains.
A mountian of a man,
with a lot more guts than brains.

Don't get me wrong!...
Ken was sharp,
but so was his knife.
Not a man to be trifled with,
if you valued your life.

Sometimes when we shared a bottle,
of Canadian or Tennessee.
The mean would wash right out of him,
and he would sing a song for me.

And sing damn good he could,
when his inhibitions were forgotten.
When his head was filled with yesterday,
and today didn't seem so rotton.

He was out of place and out of time,
angry and dangerous!
He whipped every man he ever fought,
and there were many,
and Lord could he cuss!

I stopped by his place one day,
with my baby boy.
Matt was my pride and joy,
and Matt was only four.
Ken was in an especially mean way that day,
and he told my Matt he'd whip him sore.

I mustered all my courage,
and to that big man I said,
"Ken that may be true,
but it will be after,
the me and you."

Looking back,
it's plain to see,
he was just testing my mettle.
For with a laugh the issue that never was,
was forever settled.

I was always welcome in his house,
to share a drink or a bite,
and if need be,
I was welcome to spend the night.

He passed away at Christmas time,
all alone and in chains.
I think about him now and then,
at Christmas time,
or when it rains.

[This message has been edited by StevenS (04-03-2006 11:42 AM).]

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1 posted 2006-04-03 11:42 AM


What a great story that was to read first thing this morning.  Reminds me of ones I heard as a kid about the men in the camps my grandfather was in.  We called them, "fire stories."   Enjoyed this.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-04-03 11:48 AM


StevenS
Enjoyed the read very much.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-04-03 11:48 AM


Steve, whether your tales be true or not, they never fail to move me. They have soul, grit ~ and heart!

Hugs with much affection,
Linda
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StevenS
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4 posted 2006-04-03 11:55 AM


Thank you Mysteria, Ken was the kind of man of which stories are told. :-)

Thank you for the read Sy, I'm glad you enjoyed! :-)

Thank You Earth Angel, most all my stories have a grain of truth. This one is true from start to finish. :-)

Martie
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5 posted 2006-04-03 12:14 PM


Steven....I was drawn to this peom by the name, Ken.  Ken, is the name of my youngest son.  He is nothing like your Ken...quiet and sweet natured.  I did enjoy the way you portrayed your friend.  Sounds a sad and lonely way to die.  
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6 posted 2006-04-03 12:33 PM


A most excellent write Steve.
Well done!!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

StevenS
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7 posted 2006-04-03 02:37 PM


And to live Martie!

Thank you Enchantress, most excellent poetess! :-)

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8 posted 2006-04-07 04:19 PM


sad stuff but so good!
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9 posted 2006-04-07 07:49 PM


I stopped by his place one day,
with my baby boy.
Matt was my pride and joy,
and Matt was only four.
Ken was in an especially mean way that day,
and he told my Matt he'd whip him sore.

I mustered all my courage,
and to that big man I said,
"Ken that may be true,
but it will be after,
the me and you."

~*~

If this was one of those true stories you tell,
I wonder if your son remembers the moment.
Four can be a wondrous age, and we can certainly
remember those who challenged our father.

I wonder what his memories are?



Thanks for another stick to the fire, Steve.

fmlbarebackrider2001
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10 posted 2006-04-07 09:53 PM


Steven what a wonderful tale. It reminded me of the stories my papa use to tell us kids around the camp fire.

Know yourself before you try to know someone else.

OwlSA
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11 posted 2006-04-08 12:14 PM


A story well told, but heart-breakingly sad, particularly the dying in chains.  I especially liked the part about thinking about him at "Christmas and when it rains" and the effect of it being at the beginning and the end.

- Owl

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12 posted 2006-04-08 06:20 PM


"When his head was filled with yesterday,
and today didn't seem so rotton."

iwihwt
outstanding write! you are a wonderufl story teller and did spin a rhyme fine

StevenS
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13 posted 2006-04-08 06:40 PM


Thank You All, I'm glad you enjoyed Ken. There was a side of him that I always felt privileged to know. :-)
sweetberry
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14 posted 2006-04-09 03:07 AM


Good one...I liked it
scorpio
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15 posted 2006-04-09 08:57 AM


A great tribute.  Thank you for sharing this with us.

believe in what your heart feels...

Androgynous
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16 posted 2006-04-09 10:23 AM


Wow, I truly loved this one, made me think of My friend George by Lou Reed, great song, you know it? I think you'd like it if you don't

I'll post a link to the lyrics, don't wanna take up all the reply space.
http://www.song-teksten.com/song_lyrics/lou_reed/new_sensations/my_friend_george/

Love

"How happy is the blameless vestal's lot!
The world forgetting, by the world forgot.
Eternal sunshine of the spotless mind!"

StevenS
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17 posted 2006-04-09 10:37 AM


Thank you Sweetberry, I'm glad you liked it. :-)

Thank You for reading it Scorpio. :-)

Thank You Androgynous, thats a new one for me but I enjoyed the lyrics. Maybe I can find a listen somewhere. :-)

The Lady
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18 posted 2006-04-09 04:05 PM




"Sometimes when we shared a bottle,
of Canadian or Tennessee.
The mean would wash right out of him,
and he would sing a song for me"

Funny thing about the mean Steve... sometimes it gets washed in and sometimes
it gets washed out. I'm glad your friend Ken could sing sometimes. It's a very sad story, well told.

StevenS
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19 posted 2006-04-10 08:44 AM


Lady, thats so true, it's like rolling the dice. I've lost my urge to take that gamble. :-)
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