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curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-04-03 09:41 AM

this is a song i wrote in urdu but translated it into english for you. except for the title.

JAB TAK HAI JAAN
(it means as long as thier is life)

You are so beautiful
He will come to you
He will match your bangles
He will give you his bhindhi
He will dress you with jewels.
You will be.

Flutter your eyes at me with that mascara.
Give me that flirtatious look.
We will dance together.

Love will never die
It is never afraid
Love will always stay alive
As long as there is life
Love will not fade
I will not let go of love.

you are so beautiful
He will come to you
He will match your bangles
He will give you his bhindhi
He will dress you with jewels.
You will be.

Until then, I will dream
of love.

[This message has been edited by curiouse (04-04-2006 01:08 PM).]

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-04-03 09:54 AM

"As the roses grow in my grass
As does life surprise me with joy"

Excellent. Enjoyed.

JL

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-04-03 08:16 PM

lovely write
with much feeling

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2006-04-04 01:52 PM

Hi ya gal....do you know (being from England)....what a "Toerag" is?...Paul McCartney of Beatle fame gave me this name....then, I started using it when a dear friend of mine agreed with him, that I was indeed a Toerag...she was from Britain too...how about "Toad in the hole"????

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

4 posted 2006-04-04 02:30 PM

toerag...i'm not sure if i am right.but i think it's something to do with bieng diviouse, not the friendliest name to call someone. i did wonder why you called yourself toerag.
toad in the hole is a recipe for a dish.
this all seems very wierd.
any way, hope that helps,
don't mind my song.
hugs,
curiouse

Curioustity is a fine gift...

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

5 posted 2006-04-04 02:43 PM

I was told it was a "mischievious rascal"...(British slang)....and toad in the hole is sausage with Yorkshire pudding?...and as far as the name?....Surely it doesn't fit a quiet, wall flower type, shy, innocent guy like me...ya think?...LOL

and..your poem is well written and sweet....

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

6 posted 2006-04-04 04:30 PM

i think your right about the definitions.
and the right name for such a quiet, wall flower type, shy, innocent guy like yourself woild be "charmer".as you do know how to charm someone.
thanks for reading my poem.
smiles
curiouse

Curioustity is a fine gift...

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

7 posted 2006-04-04 05:52 PM

toerag,
have you gone off me?

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