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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-03-30 06:20 AM



Disappointment always,
is the feedback that I feel.
No matter how the trying's hard,
today in world of real.

A touch of ill, and maybe age
leaves tired days to live.
No matter, it's the "Dissing" of
that makes it hard to give.

Attitude and words that thrive
minding this warm day
of better times "it is what is"
self-talking words I say.

When pick me up instead of downs
could activate and please...
Instead it's there, the usual,
to slip into with ease.

Maybe it is better to
remain in solitude
and bypass all the spend of thoughts
that disappoint my mood.

And though the choice is mine to make,
one that belies the need,
today I feel the worn of down,
unnecessary feed.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2006-03-30 06:44 PM


Ah, but the gloom will end soon.  Tomorrow, spend the day in the sun.
The age thing… well, I can’t be much help there.  
But you are way too young to be flirting with feelings of old age.  So do
Something fun!  Run around the house in your underwear!
I do that all the time!

Just kidding!

Enjoyed the write.

JL



Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-03-30 06:49 PM


Feeling you here Maur, and huggin you oh so tight....

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-03-30 07:16 PM


Sending hugs your way M.
Even warmer tomorrow...
Spring and life anew is on the horizon.

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2006-03-30 07:43 PM


hope tomorrow is better for you
Martie
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5 posted 2006-03-30 09:27 PM


Standing in the hug line, Maureen!  
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2006-03-30 10:44 PM


Sorry, just when I was beginning to feel better I am aching everywhere all over again~~

Thanks for the hugs ...
M

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