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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Trance By: Noah Eaton 1/16/06 Something must have fled your lips, and somehow found its way into my room, enshrining the feeling can give such a cold chill, leaving not a moment too soon, whenever you’re around there’s consonance, together we wait for resolve in the spheres, your yellow shadows dance across my ceiling, persevering clear and sincere... You’ve put me in a deep trance, struck at each and every first glance, just to hold you is my even chance, you’re my doe-eyed song and dance, you’ve put me in a deep trance, struck at each and every first glance, just to hold you is my even chance, you’re my doe-eyed song and dance. Waking up from your iridescent dreams, can always be so hard, wishing you can leave behind some crystal key, so I can give you all my regards. Before you fall asleep, do you find yourself, humming lyrics of songs we’ve yet to premiere, you tide me over with all your warmth, your voice is what sways the chandelier. You’ve put me in a deep trance, struck at each and every first glance, just to hold you is my even chance, you’re my doe-eyed song and dance, you’ve put me in a deep trance, struck at each and every first glance, just to hold you is my even chance, you’re my doe-eyed song and dance. (Another day passes without you here, but I swear we’re one day closer to being, all is dizzy when I hear you breathe, but I assure you you’re no burden, baby. Another day passes without you here, but I swear we’re one day closer to being, all is dizzy when I hear you breathe, but I assure you you’re no burden, baby.) You’ve put me in a deep trance, struck at each and every first glance, just to hold you is my even chance, you’re my doe-eyed song and dance, you’ve put me in a deep trance, struck at each and every first glance, just to hold you is my even chance, you’re my doe-eyed song and dance. (Another day passes without you here, but I swear we’re one day closer to being, all is dizzy when I hear you breathe, but I assure you you’re no burden, baby. Another day passes without you here, but I swear we’re one day closer to being, all is dizzy when I hear you breathe, but I assure you you’re no burden, baby.) "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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openthoughts Member
since 2006-01-16
Posts 94Where the child can be free |
You're poem shows a different face then is normally exhibited in the world of poetry. I see beauty in each word so that it creates a feeling that is potrayed rather than an image Your poem (in my mind at least) seemed to hint at the two-faced nature of love. An original approach and a marvelous result. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah Angel, she is one day closer. What lovely love songs you sing to your doe-eyed dear!  ....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your words were hynotizing me! I was swaying back and forth as though I was in a trance! Very well done, Angel Boy! Remember! ~ This might be the year! Keep that thought and manifest it into reality!  Hugs with love, Your friend, Linda |
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abbymatilda Junior Member
since 2003-12-22
Posts 35 |
"you're my doe-eyed song and dance"........ AMAZING. I'm in a full-blown swoon! Abby |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Gave me goosebumps, lovely writing Julie |
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