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What Used To Be
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What Used To Be |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
What Used To Be To Paula, Paris was this place that she called home. In the big city she could never feel alone, or could she... On the weekends her boyfriend was not around. He jumped onto the fast train headed out of town, leaving Paula alone with her cell phone in a city with at least a million other numbers one might call. One day Paula found the reason that her boyfriend was in such a hurry to leave town. In a cigar box under the bed she found a picture of her boyfriend in the bed, with what appeared to be another lover. Paula felt betrayed and alone, so she picked up her phone and made one last call to what used to be her boyfriends number. JamesLee April01 2006 |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"and made one last call to what used to be her boyfriends number." ~ Clever way of ending your story of the French Dis-Connection! Aloha & Au Revoir hugs, Linda |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Sad... Nicely written though... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Earth Angel and Neeraja for the nice responses...James |
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