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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ignite Night rapt me here in swaddle calm Darkness fell, as chiffon psalm Within thrust forth to pour the spill The words came out of waters still Trade to and fro emotions fire To be the spark of your desire Yet this intent so far removed From all that love to light has proved For now the dawn is suspect true Alight in softly lacquered hue Within myself the rhyme set free Then letting blaze eternally A focused spark confides beneath The tinder struck divine bequeath My heart to yours reveals acclaim Alight avows unending flame Copyright Kkh 3/28/06 |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
For now the dawn is suspect true Alight in softly lacquered hue Within myself the rhyme set free Then letting blaze eternally the rhyme set free indeed.....as always this is a diamond |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
TD = soft One would think that a diamond would show its sharper points... but not you. Always, fragile. Wonderful. |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Reads like a whisper. :-) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"A focused spark confides beneath The tinder struck divine bequeath My heart to yours reveals acclaim Alight avows unending flame" That would do it for me! This is a beautiful love story in four lines. Great write This Diamond, excellent!! JL  |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
WOW! I like this one; excellent imagery!!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
outstanding rhyming and theme! |
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