What Becomes of The Broken Hearted

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Open Poetry #37

What Becomes of The Broken Hearted

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2006-03-25 07:10 PM

What Becomes of The Broken Hearted

First they get hurt,
second they cry,
third they want to
go off and die.
But they don't,
because life isn't
into leaving you behind,
there's always new valleys
to enjoy and new
mountains to climb.
And love and healing will be
found in a secret place,
where silky streams flow
and warm hearts embrace.

JamesLee
March24
2006

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (03-27-2006 06:12 PM).]

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2006-03-25 09:45 PM

because life isn't
into leaving you behind,
there's always new valleys
to enjoy nnd new
mountains to climb.
And love and healing will be
found in a secret place,
where silky streams flow
and warm hearts embrace.

I really like this, James.
This ending is so true.
Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2006-03-26 02:30 AM

Only loves heals a broken heart...well, forgiveness helps, too. Nice write, JamesLee.

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

3 posted 2006-03-26 06:34 AM

your poem has so much hope.thanx for reminding me how wonderfull life is,
Curiouse.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

4 posted 2006-03-26 07:39 AM

Perhaps we are all broken hearted - some don't care to know and so get lost in the maze of busy-ness while others journey seemingly forever to that special place.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2006-03-27 03:51 PM

So true, James!
Excellent write.

JL

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

6 posted 2006-03-27 04:53 PM

Perfection!!

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

7 posted 2006-03-27 04:57 PM

Awww, sounds like you've got the right of it. Rock on!

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