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Open Poetry #37

I Just Have To Say

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

0 posted 2006-03-25 07:02 AM

What do I say
I don’t really know
I can’t even let
My true emotions show

I want to be around
talk to you face to face
I want to spend time
Exploring your happy place

Your laugh is matched only
By the beauty in your eyes
And the discussion that we’ve had
Makes me think about my replies

Your just such a cool person
I would love to know you more
Build a friendship between us
And see what might be in store

I’m not shore of what I should do
But feelings for you are there
I don’t know how to approach this
Or if you even care

Maybe I’m just overtaken
By the beauty that is you
I’m so struck by your personality
And everything you like to do

I only say this because of tomorrow
When you go back to school
I don’t want to wake up that morning
Thinking how could I be such a fool

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-03-25 07:28 AM

you need to change the word shore to sure...

nice write

M

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2006-03-26 12:27 PM

I love the way you have rhymed in this poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
Ethel

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