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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2006-03-24 04:40 PM



Inside me, my bounteous
soul, a man walks
upon downland too far
to be reached, stretching
to the lands of
freedom.Golden curling clouds
aloft, where sun shines
warm enough for joy
to burst into minds.
Fields of flowers wild,
Euphrasias, Eyebright's, Round Headed
Rampions, smothering rippling grasslands.
He walks alone, but
never is he truly
alone, within the shade
of his shadow, God
watches in silent love.
Examining each and every
wonder that feasts his
eyes with colourful profusion,
he fills his soul.
Silver and Gold illumine,
light his way through
meadows fluttered by rich
hued Argus, Orange Tip,
Chalk-Hill and Adonis
Blue butterflies, enrapturing an
amber heart open to
all possible vibrant allure.
Tears mingle with wild
wind blown rain, splashing
bracing energy, to stare
ahead, to more beauty.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-03-24 05:29 PM


Phil, I truly enjoyed your "Soul Walk".

You ended it so beautifully ~

"Tears mingle with wild
wind blown rain, splashing
bracing energy, to stare
ahead, to more beauty."

May the road ahead become even more beautiful with every step!

Love & God's Light,
Linda


emeralddreamer
Junior Member
since 2006-03-24
Posts 27
PA, United States
2 posted 2006-03-24 10:53 PM


This is a most beautiful and touching poem.

~clapping~

exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
3 posted 2006-03-25 12:30 PM


Golden curling clouds
aloft, where sun shines
warm enough for joy
to burst into minds.


That part kind of just....shined, in my mind

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

4 posted 2006-03-25 12:02 PM


This is a beautiful and touching poem; I like the imagery too!!!!!!!!!!
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
5 posted 2006-03-25 06:46 PM


Now that is a beautiful walk, Phil! .......jo
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