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curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

0 posted 2006-03-23 12:05 PM

I wanted to talk to you,
I wanted to laugh with you
but most of all I wanted to see your smile.
yet, when I came for you, you weren’t there,
you were there physically
but that smile,
that personality,
that special touch wasn’t there.
It was lost.
Your now a different person,
you don’t admire me like you used to,
you don’t notice every little thing about me.
Like you used too.
Your lost.
and because your lost,
I’m lost,
I’m lost because I want you back
but there’s no “you” there’s just this body.
Why do you not sway the way you used to,
why do you not look at me with those intimate eyes anymore?
I don’t love this body, this new person I don’t know them. My soul is lost with yours.

I want the old “you” back
but I don’t think I can ever find you again,
The worst thing of all is that
I don’t think you want to be found.
I don’t think anyone wants to find you, but me.
Find me, please

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-03-23 12:24 PM

Oh my this just aches with longing.
I know this feeling and you have described it well.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

2 posted 2006-03-23 12:30 PM

Wow ! :: bows :: :: bows :: :: bows ::

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2006-03-23 01:34 PM

well done, enjoyed!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2006-03-23 02:57 PM

Just be where you can be found and let God take over

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2006-03-23 04:53 PM

Heartfelt sadness, but very well expressed.

JL

cody 2
Junior Member

since 2006-03-12

Posts 48
london

6 posted 2006-03-23 05:30 PM

how sad when love is a one way street. well done

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2006-03-23 05:30 PM

Prepare yourself...James

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

8 posted 2006-03-23 05:39 PM

Wanting things to happen will not MAKE them happen..a true friend is a person that can step back.. and let things unfold..and not be affraid what may happen for good or ill..space and time and then things may look very different..perhaps it should be turned around?..How would the person feel to loose you.?.just for a little while.?.to feel the hurt of you gone for a while.?.illustrate what you are feeling..except the person is still there..sounds like something has happened..for them to be so distant so quickly...locked into their mind is the answer..find that conundrum..and the path will clear..well expressed...enjoyed...thank you..

Goldenrose.

curiouse
Member

since 2006-03-21

Posts 277
england

9 posted 2006-03-24 11:17 AM

thankyou all so much for all your comments but james,what do you mean by "prepare yourself"?

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