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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
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0 posted 2006-03-22 07:32 PM



Silences forgotten,
and hearts are broken.

The bombs are droppin',
and hearts are floppin'.

The wind is carrying the sentiments of the sun today.
Upon its back its weighed down with resentment of the rain.

It cannot see the moonlight in the night.
For it is hiding beneath the surface of time.

Tears are fallin',
babies are bawlin'.

The moon has faded,
the sun is jaded.

Where are we now.
What have we found.
Lost.


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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-03-22 07:43 PM


This is a fine write...there is an undercurrent here...with questions still unanswered.....the silver lining is that suffering does end..eventually...thank you for your words..oh and happy birthday...better late... than not at all Kellie....

Goldenrose.


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