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cody 2
Junior Member

since 2006-03-12

Posts 48
london

0 posted 2006-03-22 05:35 PM

God save me from all fatal errors
In my quest to bring me home
Make my time not so lonely
When I find im on my own,

And if it storms for six days
make the seventh sun
That i may find a little peace
When theres no else to run,

If i can't cope with all im given
Give me strengh to work around
And when my thoughts turn to my death
Keep me firmly fixed to ground,

For i have others of my body
Who need me a while longer
With them in mind and a little hope
Please make me that much stronger,

And if you have a smile to spare
Try to look my way
Im a little sad and very lost
Help me stay here one more day.

XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

1 posted 2006-03-22 06:23 PM

::smiles:: Loved it ! Yes, It might seem selfish....But I hope you do stick around. I am honored and blessed by your presence.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-03-22 06:26 PM

Chris, In this verse
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For i have others of my body
Who need me a while longer
With them in mind and a little hope
Please make me that much stronger,

---------------------------

I already see, much strength. Very well done.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

cody 2
Junior Member

since 2006-03-12

Posts 48
london

3 posted 2006-03-22 06:54 PM

thankyou both for your messages, yes gentle spirit i think children or anyone you care for keeps us going, i hope others can use my words if needed.

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

4 posted 2006-03-22 07:59 PM

This reads like a prayer...to be said at night before sleep...a fine write..enjoyed it...thank you..

Goldenrose.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-03-22 08:04 PM

Very well expressed.
Much enjoyed.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

sandgrain
Member Elite

since 1999-09-21

Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA

6 posted 2006-03-22 09:26 PM

This just flows so well and I love the plea for a little strength and a few days more. Great piece.

Rae

cody 2
Junior Member

since 2006-03-12

Posts 48
london

7 posted 2006-03-23 05:25 PM

I am surprised an pleased at all your kind remarks, it is so nice to have people to share my writing with, and to read what you all write, it has given me much insight, thankyou

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