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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-03-22 01:43 PM



     With my attachment
Rose petals still fall and die
     With my objections
Weeds still continue to grow
Blossoms of both, feed the bee

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
OwlSA
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1 posted 2006-03-22 01:54 PM


Love the philosophising in this.  Life will go on with or with out us - it is as tranquil and reassuring as it unconcerned with, and independent of, the individual.  Also every part of nature has its place - there is good in the bad, and bad in the good, and balance is the answer.  I love it.

- Owl

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2006-03-22 02:25 PM


With acceptance, the bee buzzes contentedly in one's bonnet.
Bee

A poem most worthy of a second read! ~ or more!


EA

iliana
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3 posted 2006-03-22 02:39 PM


You are a very clever bee, my brother!  And, this.....this is pure honey.......*hugs*.....jo
miscellanea
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4 posted 2006-03-22 04:00 PM


Some much astutely said in so few words!  A pleasure to read.

miscellanea

cody 2
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london
5 posted 2006-03-22 06:03 PM


different, but that makes it good
Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2006-03-22 06:29 PM


I love the brevity of this, so much said, in so few words.  Well done!  

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

Goldenrose
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7 posted 2006-03-22 08:03 PM


Wisdom...succint..beauty irradiating..thank you for your words..

Goldenrose.

Enchantress
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8 posted 2006-03-22 08:06 PM


A most excellent write.
'Tanka' very much!
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Rainbowdust
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9 posted 2006-03-23 04:14 AM


Exactly what Owl said! Am adding this to my library!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Rainbowdust
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10 posted 2006-03-23 04:15 AM


Oops, forgot to add it!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

LeeJ
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11 posted 2006-03-23 08:51 AM


liked the feeling of this, the intellectual gift of knowing what will be will be, in allowance and acceptance...many thanks for this
Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2006-03-27 10:30 AM


all that and I am allergic to bees..

  

Been wanting to read you but haven't had a lot of time until now...trying to do some catching up.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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