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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2006-03-21 12:57 PM


Isn't this the finest thing?
A strawberry in fingering
succulence and seedy need
ground between my teeth

I think:

"My, I needed this, it is
what I've hungered for..."

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bubblesleave
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1 posted 2006-03-21 01:00 AM


Raw,
wonderful,
sexy!

My, oh My!!!

Hugs,
Bubbles

XOx Uriah xOX
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2 posted 2006-03-21 01:52 AM


mmmmmm   juicy!
iliana
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3 posted 2006-03-21 02:06 AM


Feed the need.....that's the way it is sometimes.  Enjoyed this, my K-Lady....*huggers*....jojo
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2006-03-21 06:00 AM


oh, you've given my tastebuds a workout m'lady



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how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

Sunshine
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5 posted 2006-03-21 07:45 AM



A healthy renewal.




Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-03-21 08:19 AM


and then from here..

the chill of a long neck
the burn of the palm as one twists
the cap
then the gurgling guzzle

as the RC swallows the vanilla bean scoops
and swirls under almond shavings to float
an addiction to the top

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2006-03-21 08:20 AM


In a word, YES!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2006-03-21 08:47 AM





Enjoy!


icebox
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9 posted 2006-03-21 09:13 AM


Whoa!  Way too erotic for me!  I thik I have to go wash my eyes now.

*grin*

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10 posted 2006-03-21 12:39 PM


LOL - you're good!
serenity blaze
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11 posted 2006-03-21 02:50 PM


thank you all for reading

It's strawberry season.

Enjoy.

Local Rebel
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12 posted 2006-03-21 06:47 PM


how delicious!
vlraynes
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13 posted 2006-03-21 06:53 PM



Smiling at you...



"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

luminosity
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14 posted 2006-03-21 07:02 PM


I love strawberries.....and yep no apologies needed.....*s*
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 2006-03-21 08:04 PM


serenity
A strawberry in the mouth is worth two in the hand. LOL

Sunshine
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16 posted 2006-03-21 08:09 PM


Smiling at the replies...

Look at ALL the wonderful and intriguing responses....

it is amazing...imagination!



~*~

I also think this is your shortest poem, evah!

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17 posted 2006-03-29 09:52 AM


And....not just the strawberry. The act of eating it.

I did too -- thanks for sharing one!

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Susan Caldwell
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18 posted 2006-03-31 02:12 PM


This sounds real good about now.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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Gaia
19 posted 2006-03-31 02:22 PM


I think I just drooled a strawberry dream.

The Lady
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20 posted 2006-03-31 05:58 PM




The way you eat a strawberry is a sight to behold serenity.


Ceinwyn
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21 posted 2006-03-31 09:30 PM


yummy

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
22 posted 2006-03-31 09:38 PM


Mmmmm...may I have another please?
miscellanea
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23 posted 2006-03-31 09:43 PM


short, sweet and seedy!  Love this one!   You are such a versatile poetess!  Good to read your writing again.  

misc'e

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