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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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Well excuse me for having a life that's too full to grovel for your approval I'm sorry that I'm not down on both knees begging for your forgiveness I apologise for being myself (what a concept) you don't own me what gives you the right to walk on me? If you want to fight then at least tell me what you're mad about so I can fight with you and tell you to get (over) it would you like me to kiss your feet? Am I groveling well enough your Majesty? How about your clothes can I iron them like the obedient mindless, spiritless possession you think I ought to be? Well too bad I'll never kiss your feet I'll never grovel in the dirt (no matter how muddy) and as for your clothes I'll light them on fire just because I can |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I'll hold the match for ya |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Burn em, Baby burn em....a great poem.paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wow, I can feel your anger! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
you go girl.....well said  ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Right on, sister! Never creep to the feet of a "Creep"! Stand up and be counted! You are woman ~ and I can hear you roar!  EA |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
WOW.....now this is telling it like it is....packs a punch....  |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is great, we all need to stick up for ourselves, ill give you some zippo fluid if you like watch them burn good  Nice one Julie |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And I'll hold the door! What a team. I sure do love your spirit. I still wanna adopt you.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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weepingwillow Junior Member
since 2006-01-09
Posts 33Sin City-Las Vegas |
Now im all worked up...I love this... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
And thats how you handle creeps...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG I LOVE this. Not that you had to write it but I know a couple people I would love to send it to. I apologise for being myself (what a concept) That's the sad thing . . . truly. Nobody takes the time to even look inside. They only see themselves. This is awesome. |
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poe Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 180Heading to China |
The fire burns so brightly from this one, that the blaze can be seen from outer space. Excellent. Tomorrow comes for those who fear it. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
You GO girl! Be your own somebody! Not ANYBODY'S possession! Love it! hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hmmm, well done... he'll just have to get over it, yanno?  for the courage to not accept bad behavior. |
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