Follow the Yellow brick road

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Open Poetry #37

Follow the Yellow brick road

Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03

Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)

0 posted 2006-03-14 09:10 AM

I seek a rebirth from within
only to find words have become a forbidden sin
my heart rings like it is made of tin

Fear of love is my daily baggage
past experience has left me with old damage
I am lost and looking for a lion’s courage

Common sense says to break my restrain
but fires of the past left deep scars of pain
maybe my choice could be easy if I had a brain

Where am I going with this poetic lyric
I guess the best path to travel for the lovesick
should be simple follow the yellow brick

There is no place like home-Hoping happiness for one of my favorite poets. Your words always have inspired me to write I hope you will never stop for when I read your lines I feel like I am over the rainbow.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2006-03-14 09:39 AM

what a nice thing to say to someone

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2006-03-14 12:20 PM

Thomas~

'I seek a rebirth from within'

Ah ... for that is where it must begin~

This is a nice read this day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2006-03-14 03:59 PM

I enjoyed all the Wizard analogies!
Glad that someone can see past the storms, and embrace the moment of the rainbow.

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

4 posted 2006-03-14 04:15 PM

Ah ! Over the rainbow. Where a more glorious world is sought. Where one finds that the things his heart seeks, have always been right where he is. Where one realizes how precious home is...and that they actually never left.
Enjoyed!

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

5 posted 2006-03-14 04:38 PM

Fear of love is my daily baggage
past experience has left me with old damage
I am lost and looking for a lion’s courage

Enjoyed this a lot. Very cleverly written.

miscellanea

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