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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-03-13 06:27 PM



The Day Before the Day After

There, beyond the hope
tornado thoughts swirl the mix.
What lies beneath holding the silence,
touching that part of me
that moves me to eyespeak.

I porched today, swinging to and fro
remembering the whens of not too long ago.

I heard them chirping, the birds of Spring,
watched them flit about, their mating sing.

Sun warmth memorized,
a togethered time of walks and talks,
laughter in ripples, crossing streams
tipping your way, wanting to be caught.
wondering if I was...


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-03-14 09:49 AM


I believe I've come to an age, when listening becomes so much more complimenting...then talking...and you gal, would be one, I'd love to listen to...
Hugs...

Thomas119gold
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since 2002-06-03
Posts 708
Biloxi, MS (city by the sea)
2 posted 2006-03-14 10:16 AM


Ahhh how I love this write and will save it it for another day when I am blue and need a pick me up. This was wonderful

Tommy

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12
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Tolerance for a short time
3 posted 2006-03-14 12:59 PM


M

You sound like JOhn Denver

Dave

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2006-03-18 07:25 AM


LeeJ..I don't know Lee...I talk alot and some  people would rather I be quiet

Tommy, Monday was a delightfully warm day where the sunshine could penetrate my thoughts and give me a lift also... thank you for reading  

Dave, thank you..not sure I should ever be compared to someone like him...but thank you again

M

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