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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia 
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Incense slowly burns Fragrant smoke that intertwines Soulmates in pure bliss Candelight flickers Shadows dancing on the wall Like I wish we were ___________ waddya know, I think I might be getting the hang of this! The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Shireen~ Indeed ! These are actually considered Senryu's ... as they deal with something other than nature~ Senryu's follow the syllabic count of the Haiku ... but focus on more of a 'human/emotional element' rather than the nature of nature~ EXCELLENTLY done~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ Email - noles1@totcon.com |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
grinning here yep, you are getting the hang of it and it shall grow on you m'dear  the senryu form, this is LOL and the haiku, a nature write with same syllable count and format  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A romantic penning from a poetess with a very romantic heart!  EA |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Oops *blushing* Sorry about the mix up with Haiku and Senryu.. the definition I read was that senryu had some 'dark' or 'cynical' element into it as well, which is why I thought those were haikus? Anyway, thank you to all you gorgeous poetesses for taking the time to read! The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nice work Shireen! |
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