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Open Poetry #37

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Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2006-03-09 08:09 PM

Waiting

Just waiting there
Her Mom took the flowers,
But that was now many hours,
And there’s not been a single call
At all.

Gloom

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

1 posted 2006-03-09 08:32 PM

Perhaps she isn't home yet? *tapping fingernails on the table, waiting for the happy ending*

Caroline

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2006-03-09 08:42 PM

Perhaps there'll have to be a 5.2

only so much can be done in five little lines

Gloom

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-03-09 11:36 PM

Yes, please, a 5.2. I like these tiny poems.

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