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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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just back from their tables of pacific bowl's green teasing and afternoonery spooned amber snoberboxes are on the avenue latte botteries in their bimmergems doing guyalysis and jeanology as their nails tap on countertops of jew lee's jewelry nudity their bare faces expressionless like sex wanting on their fingers and faces and into the slices of wallets with plastic implants and so little real greenery it is but the postcard memories placed with the shiny side down under some sandy santa's snow show ______________ daark scribblenote: the avenue after 3pm |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
just back from their tables of pacific bowl's green teasing and afternoonery spooned amber this made me desire the ocean....especially since, it's going up to 70 this coming weekend...thank you very much for the visuals...hehe tremendous visuals at that then this.... snoberboxes, made me wanna give the guy a tissue...yuck... latte botteries in their bimmergems doing guyalysis and jeanology you mind surely goes beyond....exceptional language and visuals you play with... I could hear their nails tapping on the counter... and this... and so little real greenery it is but the postcard memories placed with the shiny side down outstanding!!!!!!  Morning D. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Lee J...thanks for riding along lady friend.. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
How observant you are! The images are so vivid of the passe and lackluster expressions one sometimes see presented by a younger set who has far too much plastic. But afternoons spooned amber does sound lazy and lovely. Your play with words is stunning, as usual. Oh, I have to add, you always make that last line a clincher. I'm never quite sure whether to laugh or shake my head, but they always linger. ~ Klassy ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"guyalysis and jeanology" ~ Those two words alone, were worth the price of admission!   EA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile guyology shaking my head I love your work, D You are satisfaction, guaranteed.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, thanks to yiou lady friend...am so pleased that you enjoy my blitherings. ______________ ms EA, (grin) thank you for the wave ms ______________ serene one..well I guess it could be gurology now that you mention it (wink) ..thanks for the eyes |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Blitherings? That is one thing you do not do. LOL |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I think I got an A in Guyology. Loved the language in this! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"snoberboxes are on the avenue latte botteries in their bimmergems" Oh! Wow! I am glitterblimmed! Keep on doing it. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Daark, now how can you resist that one? |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie..you were such a good student too, thanks neighbor lady friend _________________ lady ms, ohhhhhhhhh I like that one...you were in my prozac and ginsing tea weren't ya? thanks lady __________________ KL you make me smile, thanks again |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
May I have a copy of this pleaaazzzee?? I have three teenaged nieces, and have been adopted by several of their friends (all of whom do not have "cool" aunties like me.. so they say LoL) All of these lil girlyfriends of mine have become interested in poetry, and I believe they would adore this. I'd love to share it with them, along with my usual warnings against plastical leanings  and mmmmm "spooned amber"... a little Di Saronno is calling me...  Fantastic writing, Sir Daark.Caroline |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
icie-q... somehow I think he'll be pleased... but on a more personal note...guyology indeed... even I heard the nails clicking... |
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