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Relyin' On Fate
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Relyin' On Fate |
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one laugh too late New Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 3Kentucky, USA |
I bite my tongue Don't know what to say I cross my fingers and look away. I just want to kiss you so I don't find out too late that you can't rely on hearts and you can't depend on fate. Time is slipping by What are we waiting on? If you're stepping aside for destiny, the moment will be gone. Let us no believe in soft spoken "if it's meant to be"s Close your eyes, try no to wonder why you're kissing me. Alas, I'm so afraid that, maybe, what I say isn't true... Or... Maybe fate's relying on me... Like I'm depending on you... && SHE SMiiLED ONE SECOND TOO LATE... |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
I do like the picture this paints. The last lines are especially effective  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what a coool write! enjoyed this, and your pen name |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Or... Maybe fate's relying on me... Like I'm depending on you..." I really enjoyed this poem Carissa. |
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