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kitvb1
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since 2006-01-23
Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany

0 posted 2006-03-04 10:07 AM


Dreams

Of this one, I want to be sure
For this love is to be pure.
This love I want to be right
Not of power, nor of might.

It’s no matter where we go,
For that I cannot know.
I want to feel and see
That together, we are free.

I want actions not commonplace,
To feel the winds touch our face.
To have fun, be young and share,
To be happy, joyous and care.

I want to walk, hand in hand
On beautiful beaches, in the sand.
To climb mountains,
Play in fountains.

And should our flaws begin to show,
I want to understand and to know,
That we will support each other,
With no fuss and no bother.

And should I falter and fall,
You will be there to make me tall.
And should you sway and bend,
I will be there to help you mend.

Kit


We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths.

kitvb1@hotmail.com

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Air Goddess
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 108
Canada
1 posted 2006-03-04 11:27 AM


I enjoyed the glimpses of your "Dreams"....
kitvb1
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since 2006-01-23
Posts 28
Trebgast, Germany
2 posted 2006-03-06 05:44 AM


Glad u liked it... it's what I hope to one day find. Thx for ur comment... Kit

We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths.

kitvb1@hotmail.com

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since 2004-02-01
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california
3 posted 2006-03-21 02:15 PM


May you be blessed with  the unconditional
love of your dreams~

sounds like we share the same dream~
As I am sure many others too~

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2006-03-21 02:18 PM


Beautiful dream.

JL


Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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South Africa
5 posted 2006-03-21 02:57 PM


Never let go of your dreams!
The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
6 posted 2006-03-21 06:11 PM




Excellent write... beautiful dreams.

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