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colomnon
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since 2006-03-03

Posts 1

0 posted 2006-03-03 12:53 PM

What should I do?
Where should I go?

I ask myself these questions out loud. I listen for an answer. No one answers of course. Instead I hear the wind move past the dark corner in which I hid, to pass a quick bite. I huddle deeper in my dark corner to think some more.

What will happen in the future?
How shall I act?

Again I’m answered with silence as the light slowly disappears from my dark corner. My soul weeps with the coming dark. I will survive this night like previous nights that have come to pass. But each night will come sooner and sooner until there is only darkness.

What will happen to me?

No one answers, no one ever will. The darkness is complete now. I again huddle against this damnable corner where I stay… for now.
The darkness is whole.
The darkness is cold.

aujussy wolf

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since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

1 posted 2006-03-03 12:57 PM

very good work here ... very good !

In his mantle gray he walked one day across a shining floor and with crystal key in secrecy he opened an ivory door -J.R.R. Tolkien(T.Bombadil-the adv

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Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2006-03-03 01:50 PM

"...he reminds me of....me."
Doc Holliday -- Tombstone

Nice....prose and yet very much not prose!

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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

3 posted 2006-03-03 03:23 PM

The verse paints a vivid picture of a corner, inside the fading light of desparation.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-03-04 12:02 PM

Welcome to Passions!

Please, check your Email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

StevenS
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since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

5 posted 2006-03-04 01:55 PM

I'm familar that corner colomnon. Maybe you can find an answering voice as I have on these pages. Welcome! :-)

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2006-03-04 04:18 PM

I also know this corner...have been in it and passed it by. Welcome to Passions!!

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