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Tapping the Mist
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Tapping the Mist |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Tapping the Mist A squeeze of lemon just a twist To tap the measure of the mist Stirred and mixed into impound And this is truly what I found A tang of taste the rig of dew That lit the sky a sprig of blue The pleasure of a shawl of dawn The essence of a life reborn The echo of the hallow reed The rhythm that the heart beats bleed The spirit tasting nature’s core The magic of a sense of awe And in the coma of impart I lived a moment of restart With hands outstretched upon the beach I tried to pass within the breach But mist is like the bells that chime They also ride the sands of time |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A tang of taste the rig of dew That lit the sky a sprig of blue The pleasure of a shawl of dawn The essence of a life reborn The echo of the hallow reed The rhythm that the heart beats bleed The spirit tasting nature’s core The magic of a sense of awe And in the coma of impart I lived a moment of restart With hands outstretched upon the beach I tried to pass within the breach But mist is like the bells that chime They also ride the sands of time ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Do you know how groovy this is???? do you know how cool you write??? Im giddy from your rhymes divine today.... this line.... The pleasure of a shawl of dawn thats poetic gold... "shawl of dawn" ... you rock! so many clever lines in this gem.... the symbolism...the imagery...the word play..the intent of your wisdom.... The echo of the hallow reed The rhythm that the heart beats bleed And in the coma of impart I lived a moment of restart Oh yeah....... you rock.   *ww*   |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well look at her! Hard to top that comment isn't it  I have to say though - this has just got to be a favorite write now, I absolutley loved this one Sy. How on earth you come up with these original sonnets every day is beyond me, I can't write even one! Good on ya! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'And in the coma of impart I lived a moment of restart With hands outstretched upon the beach I tried to pass within the breach But mist is like the bells that chime They also ride the sands of time' May the poetic sands of your time keep flowing for a long time to come~ WONDERFUL are you, sir Poet extraordinaire !!! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You sure know how to make a guy feel good. Miss you. Sharon, You write pretty darn good. Take care and one of these days we will meet again. Marge, You are a doll and some day we will meet again. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Mr. T.! Reading your rhyme is always like riding the mists of time.  Love you, Sir Sage! EA |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
This is just too good! I adore it  Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good very, very early morning, Sy. This was some lovely writing and I sure did enjoy it! ....jo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes, as all the others, this is absolutely devine~ oh sweet sy poetry man of mine~ My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Glad yo are feeling well enough to be here I missed you. Caroline, You are just too sweet, thank you. iliana Love to read your coments. MGROVES You make my day when I see you here, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
All of the above and add delightful! I love it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you my lady. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
They most certainly do, don't they? Another great piece of your wisdom pie! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Thank you my friend. |
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