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ambermize
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since 2001-04-21
Posts 157
California

0 posted 2006-03-03 12:43 PM



Poetically you fit me,
Destined to degrade,
Everything we used to know,
Theatrically we play.

Gazing past suspicion,
Wallowing in doubt,
Tearing open wounds that bleed,
Feeling each other out.

Drastically he tortures,
She revels in delight,
Exuding travesty without shame,
They prey up on the sight.

Unwillingly you love me,
Conflicting what you are,
Painstakingly I drain you,
Dwelling in your heart.

Breaking all that matters,
Taking in the agony,
Blinding lust, lingers here,
Protecting our insanity.

Harvested Demons,
Escape the soul,
Without so much as question,
Dancing, Swirling, writhing,
Enveloping us  both, without discretion

© Copyright 2006 amber mize - All Rights Reserved
MUSEconnieSEconnie
Member
since 2006-02-28
Posts 74
california
1 posted 2006-03-03 02:15 AM


Theatrically we play.

SUGGEST:
Theatrically we'VE playED.

FOR A SMOOTH RHYME. OTHERWISE,
I LOVED IT!

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2006-03-03 03:43 AM


Nice poem!
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