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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you said I was a special something sometimes like a friendly shirt you didn't mind wearing over the bare of your exposure on occasional cold mornings when lonely left the door open you said someone should tell me often what only you felt inside with your hands in your pockets unaccustomed to speaking such as heart piece poetry to eyes wide open waiting to read the next line hoping there was a book shelf left on a wall of many more to follow small print versions with room for your recitals to grow as your hands quit their trembling and your pockets became more conditioned to the patches of our unconditional healing ___________ daark |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
unconditional healing is special indeed!  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lil neighbor, thanks ms martie |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"on occasional cold mornings when lonely left the door open" You do have a way with words Stranger. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
unaccustomed to speaking such as heart piece poetry to eyes wide open waiting to read the next line hoping there was a book shelf left on a wall of many more to follow small print versions with room for your recitals to grow ~*~ Thank you for looking so closely into the finer nuances... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
 you are special~and i love the way your shirt fits with whispers flowing keeping one warm when hands come out of pockets~ My spirit will rise |
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LukeMW Junior Member
since 2006-03-01
Posts 15Canada |
honestly one of the best poems by anyone that I've read lately. Do you listen to Bob Dylan's music? This poem reminds me of "fourth time around" and a lot of the lyrics from Blonde on Blonde (that's the album name if anyone is confused or offended! lol) |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
...ok......inhale...breathe ~ Klassy ~ [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (03-02-2006 12:03 AM).] |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
wow... this is my kinda stuff! I love how all your pieces have that wonderful cadence. Actually, it reminds me of sheets on the clothesline, snapping in the wind, in slow-mo. Totally a good thing. Everyone always turns to look when they hear that  Caroline the only man worth your tears will never make you cry |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady friend, bless you for your warm considerations _________________ ms sunshine, thank you penshine for your wave and smile ____________________ ms groves, you sooth me with your soft speak _______________ friend luke, humble thanks, yes I am a fan of the D man...perhaps I heard him in the background here too _______________ ms KL, you tempt me with your visits...and your edited replies (grin) thanks so much _________________ ms nice ice..(thank you) I like the image of the sheets on the line and a mischievious wind perhaps playing |
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