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Open Poetry #37

Hearts of Sorrow

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2006-03-01 01:49 PM

Hearts of Sorrow

Loneliness invades the conscience and defiles the heart;
turning its flesh to stone, and corrupting love.
However, it is not the measure or the depth of your pain
nor the staining memories to reconcile,
instead it is the passing of time which can ruin
with unforgiving, or heal with forgetfulness…

I know the sorrow in your hearts.
And, I know too,
that love can mend it for you.

Let the past be broken off and gone forever.
And, let the pleading for integrity fade.
It isn’t you, or your precious hearts betrayed,
but the supplier of corruption whose debt
someday will be repaid, in kind…

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-03-01 02:47 PM

JL, this was beautiful...most preciously written and felt...thanks very much for sharing this work of art....

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2006-03-01 02:59 PM

I know the sorrow in your hearts.
And, I know too,
that love can mend it for you.

I wish that could always be so. *S* This is beautiful, JL... so beautiful!!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2006-03-01 03:05 PM

JL~

'it is the passing of time which can ruin
with unforgiving, or heal with forgetfulness…'

You've poetically stated a universal truth here~

And ... new love can and does heal~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-03-01 10:56 PM

"Let the past be broken off and gone forever."

Sage advice... beautiful poem.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2006-03-02 04:51 PM

Thanks all.

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