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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I flew in some kite's mind over the scarlet skies reading the red of your smile and damning my hand's distance from a dial or door knob lucky consideration is locked brassy and I miss those infections of your perversions proposed in cellophane and freckles table clothed for hungry your tires melded my saliva black lipstick on a highway and your stopping was lovelier than your hurry home adieus but I did see him in your eyes more often lately than the windows and wondered if you were healing or just finally broken open to the comfortable side of apathy without the fool's gold glitter you usually chained to your jewelry ____________ daark |
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2CatchASwan2 New Member
since 2003-04-14
Posts 6 |
i really liked this because it sounds like a total free style,correct me if im wrong. thats ususally the way i write mine just whatever pops into my head..well however u wrote it,its still awesome. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
2catch,..yes I would say it is much a free style..of organized specifics, intentionally disorganized, metamorphicly speaking of course. You bless me with the read |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do have a decidedly delicious way when you pretzle ideas... and sounds.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
moi? prexxel soooounds? thanks sunny one |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oui, vous... ingenuous one. I agree with Sunshine. You have quite a way with pretzled and prexxeled stuff. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you do have a way with twisting and turning words into something intoxicating  My spirit will rise |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
The IceQueen is Hooked Caroline |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady friend, thank you for twisting your smile into such a delightful reply ________________ ms groves, you always make me feel read by special eyes, thank you ms ________________ ms ice, I am blessed by the tugging of your movements on my barbless treble |
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