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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-01-13 01:33 PM


As the eagle flies
I hear the cries
from a far and distant past
calling me..

return and see
just what mankind has cast

away

thrown to the side
while buried deeply, yet residing
here, there and everywhere...

On sacred soil
we have tread
while tears of Nations
on earth were bled
seeping deep
into the ground
uniting each
      all are bound
by the whispers
on the wind

the ancient spirits,    with wisdom
speak again

with the rising
of each dawn in new
remember that
the past holds truths
that binds one to all
and all to one
in circles   completed

and just begun....

Listen,  as the eagle    f l i e s........


seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2006-01-13 01:51 PM


Gentle One, your words soar with the eagles ~ as does your spirit.

Hugs with love,
Linda

Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-01-13 02:08 PM


"with the rising
of each dawn in new
remember that
the past holds truths
that binds one to all
and all to one
in circles   completed

and just begun....

Listen,  as the eagle    f l i e s........"

Beautiful words here Donna.
Love ya lady~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

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Riding
3 posted 2006-01-13 02:15 PM


Beautifully written   I love the way you took me into your thoughts with this one.

and then He created the horse...

Sunshine
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4 posted 2006-01-14 09:34 AM



A song for Oklahoma...

and all of the Nations.

One of your best, little one.

"It matters not this distance now" from Yesterday's Love
~*~ KRJ

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2006-01-14 04:17 PM


I'm listening Bella...

a magnificent write.



m xx

how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more
~Neruda~

OwlSA
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6 posted 2006-01-14 05:09 PM


Oh, I love, love, love, love, love this!  Gentle Spirit, be careful.  If you get any better, you may pop!

- Owl

OwlSA
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7 posted 2006-01-14 05:22 PM


I meant to put this in my original reply and as it isn't showing yet (for me anyway), I can't edit it in.

I think I may have put this in another reply some time ago, but to whom, I can't remember.  It is for me a much-loved poem and your poem reminds me of this - with regard to the connection between us all:

Dedeication

As one who, walking in the twilight gloom,
Hears round about him voices as it darkens,
And seeing not the forms from which they come,
Pauses from time to time and turns and hearkens;

So walking here in twilight, O my friends;
I hear your voices, softened by the distance,
And pause and turn to listen, as each sends
His words of friendship, comfort and assistance.

If any thought of mine, or sung or told,
Has ever given delight or consolation,
Ye have repaid me back a thousand fold,
By every friendly sign or salutation.

Thanks for the sympathies that ye have shown!
Thanks for each kindly word, each silent token,
That teaches me, when seeming most alone,
Friends are around us, though no word be spoken.

Kind messages that pass from land to land;
Kind letters that betray the heart’s deep history,
In which we feel the pressure of a hand -
One touch of fire - and all the rest is mystery!

The pleasant books, that silently among
Our household treasures take familiar places,
And are to us as if a living tongue
Spake from the printed leaves or pictured faces!

Perhaps on earth I never shall behold,
With eye of sense, your outward form and semblance;
Therefore to me ye never will grow old,
But live forever young in my remembrance.

Never grow old, nor change, nor pass away!
Your gentle voices will flow on for ever,
When life grows bare and tarnished with decay,
As through a leafless landscape flows a river.

Not chance of birth or place has made us friends,
Being oftentimes of different tongues and nations,
But the endeavour for the selfsame ends,
With the same hopes and fears and aspirations.

Therefore I hope to join your seaside walk,
Saddened, and mostly silent, with emotion;
Not interrupting with intrusive talk
The grand majestic symphonies of ocean.

Therefore I hope, as no unwelcome guest,
At your warm fireside, when the lamps are lighted,
To have my place reserved among the rest,
Nor stand as one unsought and uninvited!

- Henry Wadsworth Longfellow

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Gaia
8 posted 2006-01-14 05:30 PM


smiling here
putting this in my nest

littlewing
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9 posted 2006-01-14 07:11 PM


Damn, this is the best I have read from you, I swear, wish I had written it myself.  

I adore this write, Donna.

You are flying with the eagles, my, my . . .

(but always were anyhow)

I love the breaks, they are perfect, sounded like whispers.


Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2006-02-02 06:07 AM


Thank you all for the smiles you have given me! Your comments are so kind.  I appreciate your replies and wish I had more time to be here.   
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