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jody5
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0 posted 2006-02-25 10:33 PM


Some people listen to the music
The tone of the words they see
Others listen only to the lyrics
Because it reminds them of how it used to be.
Some listen to find the freedom
That we want so much to see.
To find the respect that our parents lost,
It's part of society...
Some listen to find determination
The strength music gives to go on.
And with each new song they hear some truth
Which makes people feel they belong.


© Copyright 2006 Kimberly Benton - All Rights Reserved
Kathy
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since 2006-02-10
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1 posted 2006-02-25 10:40 PM


As a musician, I find you have incredible insight!

As a person, I find your write delightful!

Hugs,
Kathy

jody5
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2 posted 2006-02-25 10:52 PM


Thank you Kathy.  That is a very nice compliment.  I want to write lyrics for music and have been working on 8 songs which are being published soon on CD.  

Hugs Kim


FNG
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since 2006-02-07
Posts 477

3 posted 2006-02-26 02:20 AM


Congratulations jody5!

wish you success.

This aside, you have a wonderful poem here.

'Some listen to find the freedom
That we want so much to see.'

Music gives me freedom.

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
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4 posted 2006-02-26 04:03 PM


Keep writing the music...and the poetry. They are both a gift.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2006-02-26 04:12 PM



Do you find mellow
in some voice smoothing
the way,
a song to be sung
bringing April to May?

Do you write
by candle-light, some
winsom notes following
moonbeam's bright?

Do you sway to some
song's dream?
For this poem made sound
or so it seemed.

~*~

Jody, thank you for the inspire.


The Lady
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6 posted 2006-02-26 05:03 PM



Published on a CD? How wonderful! Congratulations. I enjoyed your poem.


shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14
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In Reality
7 posted 2006-02-26 05:39 PM


Ahhh Yesss, MUSIC !....ENJOYED MUCH,PAUL

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

jody5
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since 2005-12-21
Posts 876
California, U.S.A.
8 posted 2006-02-26 10:25 PM


I Just wanted to thank everyone for the very posative feedback I recieved from each and every one of you.  My poetry and lyrics is what gives me my freedom. I am glad I was able to inspire you to write such a lovely poem sunshine. Thank you all again, I am just as impressed with your works.

Hugs Kim


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