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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2006-02-24 05:18 PM

They pose each night
before the changing
of extremes,
when the sun turns
to shadow,
and the moon sweeps
the dust off
the green
on the meadow,

in their rows of black,
they stand tall
when the sky spins,
and neither falter
nor shy
from the applause.

© Copyright 2006 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2006-02-24 05:20 PM

Nice write here..enjoyed the read..thank you..

Goldenrose

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-02-24 05:23 PM

Excellent write Michele!!
Very much enjoy your style.
Hugs~Nancy

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

3 posted 2006-02-24 05:24 PM

Very good.

Reminds me of Robert Francis. . .

John

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2006-02-24 06:01 PM

Wonderful Michele. I really liked this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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Gaia

5 posted 2006-02-24 06:21 PM

I've sure missed you Mish! This is gorgeous.
Now, go take your own bow, m'dear!

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2006-02-25 01:57 PM

a Heavenly showing ....

... no less.

ct

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2006-02-25 04:42 PM

They pose each night
before the changing
of extremes,

Love that thought!!!

Excellent poem, golden goddess!!!

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

8 posted 2006-02-25 04:49 PM

This was really a nice write. Much enjoyed.
Hugs Kim

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

9 posted 2006-02-26 03:49 AM

okey dokey

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

10 posted 2006-02-26 04:03 PM

Yes, Michele...

take a bow
for this one.

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

11 posted 2006-02-26 05:45 PM

I've always enjoyed your writing

This is as excellent as ever

Dave

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