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Koku
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Koku |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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In the latter days Of the law With the sky all gray And rain pouring down Though life is short And ends in smoke Yet the flute Must have its tune Moon rising Over mountain |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yes night falls even as the cricket jumps into action |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ever more.  |
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smithdr Junior Member
since 2006-02-25
Posts 26 |
a neat little poem thanks for the read David |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"Yet the flute Must have its tune" My son would definitely agree with you as he's a flute player but apart from that, enjoyed the read. Thanks. |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
The flute part lost me, but other than that I liked. Your poem has a certain catchy flow to it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Much enjoyed... hugs, Nancy  ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
very nice flow. I liked it. hugs Kim |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Greatly enjoyed. |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
smoothly written. nice flow. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Koku....the price of a year of life. Yes, this poem is very well named. Very well, indeed. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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