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Open Poetry #37

Who can ignite?

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

0 posted 2006-02-23 04:35 AM

Im much surrounded,
by people around.

I feel so lonely,
very much an irony.

My appearances lie,
For no one can spy,
A screaming being inside.

As someone pass,
I look for warmth.
Any sign to say,
'I know'.

There were only liveless glares,
Trapped in their own fair share.

I am mute,
For i can't speak for myself;
What is amiss,
I cannot tell.

I am blind,
For I can't see;
where beauty lies,
In this world of vices.

Who can ignite,
the glow in my sight?

wvatvrider
Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 78
West Virginia,USA

1 posted 2006-02-23 06:51 AM

very nice poem with loads of meaning for me-yes sometimes it is hard to open up to others, perhaps because we fear once the dam is breached a flood of emotion might overwhelm our friends--and that we would never choose to do,so we remain mute

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-02-23 07:14 AM

Who can ignite,
the glow in my sight?

only you can...when you see the beauty in your spirit, muse, and realize just how awesome you are...then, things beging to change...

wonderful self exploration...and some very astute questions to ponder

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

3 posted 2006-02-23 11:19 PM

Thank you for your comments

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