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Armour
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Armour |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
"Armour" You pound in vain Upon the walls of My metal skin You grope along in hope of finding A place you can crawl in You call out to tell me I don't have to hide You say you can wait me out But time is on my side 6/2/1996 |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very very nice, enjoyed this Welcome to PIP |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Short and powerful.... Time on your side..... Love it |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
like this alot  |
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desert-spike Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 194TX/USA |
Thank you both. That one is neither to, nor about anyone in particular. The lines just popped into my head one lazy day in 1996, and I happened to have a pen, and a writing journal handy that day. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is the waiting that makes you wonder, why and where do they go~ Nice writing~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Armour We build are own....is it to hide in, or to keep others out? Perhaps both? Enjoyed this! |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
nice write I enjoyed this. It provokes thought and thats always nice. I like to journal too. welcome to pip Hugs Kim |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
A good one ! paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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