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helenadepp
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since 2006-01-16
Posts 59
durham, england

0 posted 2006-02-20 10:06 AM



Plastered off my face
pulling out my hair
making my life such a waste
this is way too much to bear

Wanna run away
i need to find a purpose
Wish you wanted me to stay
to scratch beneath the surface

Trying to cope
As your steered to another
Well iv'e lost all hope
You only want to act like my brother

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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-02-20 11:06 AM


knowing this, and hurting for you...heartfelt write, I felt your saddness
Air Goddess
Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108
Canada
2 posted 2006-02-20 04:41 PM


Sometimes we have to lose it to
fint it....
great poem.....

Goldenrose
Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

3 posted 2006-02-20 05:01 PM


There is despair here but you can turn despair into light...know that suffering can and has to end eventually...but england doesnt help does it?..i know...thank you for the words..

Goldenrose.


Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

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