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Big Alone (with music link)
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Big Alone (with music link) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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music link http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=31974 The Big Alone Well I ain't no preacher I'm no heart savin saint But I am a believer In what is and what ain't There's no kid left in me Can't change things I regret Feelin down at forty-three Ain't found no true love yet Chorus I'm lost out here in the big alone Wonderin what my life's about I feel empty to the bone My time is runnin out Need a love to call my own Need a heart to lean on....out here in the big alone I did some good-bye lovin With some Mary's & Janes They all gave me somethin But nothin I could save No more Romeo disguise Can't keep livin this way Need love to ease my mind The same lover everyday Chorus But I'm lost out here in the big alone Wonderin what my life's about I feel empty to the bone My time is runnin out Need a love to call my own Need a heart to lean on....out here in the big alone Bridge: When the dawn comes soft and gentle An I face the new daylight I need someone right beside me Who'll be there day and night. Chorus I'm lost out here in the big alone Everybody talkin crazy I feel empty to the bone Can't hear what they're saying Need a love to call my own Need a heart to lean on......out here in the big alone |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...this is great! |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, this is awesome words and the music is great, too. Thanks for sharing with us. Hugs, Ethel |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent Eric! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love that line "out here in the big alone" I'll be humming this as I work tonight (alone) Eric, I liked the slight changes you made to the song lyrics, especially the chorus line your lyrics and music are easy to listen to and I found myself singing along (won't torture your ears with my version) time to get your cd  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Eric~ BRAVO! I loved this, both the poem & the music - you've done well. A heartfelt piece - thanks for sharing ~hugs~  Tracie |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
...There may be some kid left in ya yet...  enjoyed.. hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron [This message has been edited by dgvarner (02-19-2006 05:00 PM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi ethome, I do so enjoy your music and your lyrics. In this case I loved the view from the bridge. It does indeed get lonely out there. *Hugs* to you if you need one! Always good to read you, Sir~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Why thank you Martie I appreciate that...I will get back to the others very soon. Eric |
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