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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
Just one in a crowd, Pondering. Alone among the many. Wondering... Hoping for just a glance from you. Trying so desperately. I wish I didn't care. Worlds apart, yet so close. Will you find me among the midst of it all? Waiting... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You convey the mood well. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
heartfelt longing - enjoyed! ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
At least I found your poem... so there is hope... grin |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Nice work wanderingin. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
have been in that wondering and waiting position before....it's rather excruciating! enjoyed the write.. hugs, g "We of the craft are all crazy...all are more or less touched." Lord Byron |
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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
air goddess, hee, hee! That was the point, except I was trying to get someone else's attention on here!  Still waiting... |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Sigh...still no luck eh.... Well, before it gets covered by Yesterday's dust...let me try and wipe some off so that you will be more visible to all (~_*) |
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jinx26 Junior Member
since 2005-12-12
Posts 38Jersey |
ben stuck waiting and watching so heres a bump jinx |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
WN, enjoyed this weave of time bend...fun read with a serious flavor |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well done, felt the lonely moment.. |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
I see you! And I would tap someone's shoulder if I just knew who... Enjoyed! Shenachie |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And I see you too! This is lovely... Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Air Goddess Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108Canada |
Whew! What a relief... I almost didnt find you... totally buried under Yesterday's dust... Lol |
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BlueEyes Member
since 2002-08-30
Posts 152TX, USA |
Just a *bump*, in case the intended target hasn't noticed yet... Loved this write, I've felt this way myself... Enjoyed... tera |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
'Wondering... Hoping for just a glance from you. Trying so desperately. I wish I didn't care. Worlds apart, yet so close.' This is touching. I felt this before. |
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