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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2006-02-17 07:52 AM


The longer one writes
greater stretches
pulse
more material
has to surface
a mind pop
roused from sleep


keyboards click
in association
for greater stretches need
vital jargon
ample material
innumerable dew droplets
condense
then vanish
populate thin air


longer yet
when lives surface
cascade
then network
ample their material
one writes in context
a mind pops
summons
as if roused
inactivity sheds
all the more
and longer




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Sunshine
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1 posted 2006-02-17 08:01 AM


a mind pops

~*~

Yes!

LeeJ
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2 posted 2006-02-17 08:13 AM


yes, very true, mind pops, but then, to, in my case, there are brain freezes...

tintillating write, perfect for a Friday morning...thank you

ecrivan
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3 posted 2006-02-17 09:42 AM


I need the self-encouragement, Lee


iliana
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4 posted 2006-02-18 01:48 AM


understanding this, Martin.....jo
nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2006-02-18 09:07 AM


inactivity sheds


I was thinking just that today...how I have such a boring life that even I am at a loss for words ( some would say I am in denial ...not that I  couldn't write but that the feeling just isn't there right now.

M

ecrivan
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6 posted 2006-02-18 05:29 PM


That's one reason to try on something new, like scriptwriting there are so many topics around Maureen


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