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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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I have bathed in your waters and let the clouds burst over my nakenedness; but your heart is in hiding, and this night churns with restlessness; the view of the harbor finds no crown of waves, just a flatline of apathy; and i hold, to the faint trail of the foam, that still traces your home for me. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (02-17-2006 10:58 AM).] |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
I loved this, I really did. the view of the harbor finds no crown of waves, just a flatline of apathy; that kind of stuck in my head. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Have missed you here Michelle. What soulful pearls within this write. The mood of verse was captivating. Welcome back. TD |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
So good to see you back here bringin' me a seashell so I can listen too . . . *grin* |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Welcome back, inky. This brought to mind an image of a little girl, lost in her own world, and liking it.   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
whoa!!!!!!!! Enjoyed  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Michele... you have been missed! Hugs~Nancy |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
the view of the harbor finds no crown of waves, just a flatline of apathy; and i hold, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ You're poetry is so fine, you write to and from the heart, and sometimes you bring tears to my eyes. *Hugs* girlfriend~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sadly exquisite. - Owl |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
the view of the harbor finds no crown of waves, just a flatline of apathy; beautiful, just beautiful... the view of the harbor finds no crown of waves sighhh great lines Michelle m xx how i would love you, love you as no one ever did! Die and still, love you more. And still love you more..and more |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh inked one it is so great to see you posting again, and with such a beauty you gift us. Have missed your writes Goddess!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lovely writing, Michele Hope all is well~~  M |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
Very nice.................paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hi Michele...missed ya. This is awesome! ....jo |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is fantastic - I enjoyed this very much ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Welcome back....now lets see how long it takes you to do something stupid to get banned again...was this the 2nd or 3rd time? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome back! So glad your voice is once again being heard here.... This is beautiful. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Michele, it is soooooo good to see you again and to read your excellent writing. I especially loved this ending...... "and i hold, to the faint trail of the foam, that still traces your home for me." I missed you, Sweetie. Hugs, Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks very much for stopping by: always appreciated |
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