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Petite Applique |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Repost Petite Point Appliqué The wind that whispers in the night Secrets of the rose Silver crested clouds at night Visions that impose Shadows dancing lunacy Round a maypole log A moon that lights fantasy Bull frogs in a bog Adding songs of interplay Passing through my ear Songs that sing and seem to say Don Quixote’s here The sweet smell of earth just turned Rising from the mist The suns golden rays returned All beyond resist Passing through the wind that’s there Carried softly in the air |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A lyrical write filled with wonderful images Sy!! Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A good write here sey..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Edward Grim Senior Member
since 2005-12-18
Posts 1154Greenville, South Carolina |
Wow Sy, I've never been a big fan of rhyming poems but I think I'm starting to change my mind. I love this poem; the content, the flow, it's brilliant. I think I like it because it is so different; this might be your best. The whole poem was perfect, well done indeed. Cheers - Ed "Give me a museum, and I'll fill it." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 wonderful write Sey guy.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was delightful to get lost in, if even for a moment...loved the visuals in this dear Sy man Greetings from PA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A most excellent write this morn Sy! Very much enjoyed the imagery. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~  ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you my friend. Goldenrose And I thank you. Ed Loved your cheers, thank you my friend. Gentle Spirit Thank you sweety. LeeJ Thank you sweety.  Nancy Thank you my dear. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SeymourDearest~ You just give the bestest poetic *hugs*~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Didn't I tell you I like hugging you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"The sweet smell of earth just turned Rising from the mist" Lovely! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Thank you dear. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
the sweet smell of your words like roses blooming on gods green earth. a natural high, on life a pleasure to always stop and enjoy the aroma of your verse~ My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Always a pleasure to read your comments. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sir T...this is one of your finest. An excellent poem of imagery and the flow and rhyme are impeccable. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Sy~ thanks for the repost - this was just such a delightful read and one which I enjoyed immensely ~hugs~  Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, You are a good and kind friend, thank you tracie66 Hugs back Tracie. |
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