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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-02-12 10:52 AM


commas and the law of physics
blended in dry wind with sand
just enough for color
black I think it was
before I closed my eyes
and sewed them shut
with the wires from your piano

I don't go there often
to the doors with two way swing
but it is fun to observe you
when you push your perfume under
like is was a key to something
you had kept locked away private
for occasions like goodbyes

and when you dress up in baggy pants
yes the see thru kind beltless
and ask me if your bottom is too small
for my hands to be interested in
when you lean over howevering
some point of usless contimplation
that we must reach an understaning on

I will admit I am impressed with you
how you have grown into a whoa man
and you stay without attachments
that make you a complete machine
that can do almost anything usless
except for pretty paint jobery
at the corner store's eyeway

of a closet macy's five and time
_________
daark

scribblenote: reunions are like reonions, they do something to the digestion that leaves a real bad taste in your mouth...sometimes


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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2006-02-12 11:08 AM


sometimes....


yep, it sure does at times...
Enjoyed your art here this morning D~

*wavin hi from PA*

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-02-12 11:13 AM



"Sometimes"...

and sometimes reonions
are like reunions
where something new
can be discovered
in one's past...

Enjoyed this morning's treat, Sir.


The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
3 posted 2006-02-13 12:20 PM




I have enjoyed it too Stranger.



om
Junior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 31
ontario/canada
4 posted 2006-02-13 12:42 PM


hey daark, bin reading some of your writes
I really appreciate your word mystering!!!
If I may, introduce the topic in some form to pull us in from the 'beginning', just my perspective...cheers.

Air Goddess
Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 108
Canada
5 posted 2006-02-13 08:11 PM


Hmmm... interesting!
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