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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-02-12 10:47 AM




This Moment, So Intimate

Hearts whisper in the dark
loving tones soothe
releasing more
than what the body needs~
surpassing what the soul desires.

Entwined in rythmic thoughts
time of tender           savored
engraved on eternal walls
of memories.

Flames of love burn
lighting hearts of passion,
touching
more than just mere
serendipitous pleasures
each second spent in cherish~

this moment, so intimate

when two hearts
lie together cradled
in the haven
of our love....





seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-02-12 11:22 AM


"when two hearts
lie together cradled
in the haven
of our love...."

So very beautiful Donna...
Love ya lady~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-02-12 01:21 PM


A beautiful post, considering the
upcoming of Cupid's day...

enjoyed it very much...

love,

Mom

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2006-02-12 01:28 PM


Gentle Spirit
Lovely is what lovely does.

Magnus
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4 posted 2006-02-12 09:17 PM


Beautifully done Donna....love the words..
the feel.

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2006-02-12 10:37 PM


This is so pretty, Donna~
There is something about being cradled I find endearing,
as well as the tender moments you write of.

Just lovely!

The Lady
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6 posted 2006-02-12 11:21 PM




Delicate and so perfect!



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