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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-03-09 01:50 AM


5159
Sacrifice in Darkness

09 March 2006


Death to a broken heart
love to a soul that died
Where was living
to be unnoticed in dark

Struck between immortal
what morale brings peace
As if confidence was not the seed
black to colour not bright

Dismal to surrounding
was this the knight to depart
For she would never surrender
who said prayer was to answer

Sacrifice or sacrilege
a farewell from long off
There was no tomorrow
because then it was day


“And the earth was without form, and void; and darkness was upon
the face of the deep. And the Spirit of God moved upon the face
of the waters. And God saw the light, that it was good: and God
divided the light from the darkness. And God called the light Day,
and the darkness he called Night. And the evening and the morning
were the first day. And to rule over the day and over the night, and
to divide the light from the darkness: and God saw that it was good.”
Genesis 1: 2, 4-5, 18 KJV




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1 posted 2006-03-09 05:51 PM


Christopher~
This is a very moving piece~

The Bible quotation you cited at the end is my favorite~
Thank you for sharing~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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froggy
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2 posted 2006-03-20 10:51 AM


Beautifully said.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

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