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Open Poetry #36

A Few Special Places

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2005-08-07 01:24 AM

In A Few
  Special Places...

her perfume
still caresses
  the air,

reminding me
  of how much
   I still care.

Yet my heart
  must not linger there,

I must move on,
  now that she's gone.

JamesLee
August07
2005
Not a current event.
I have one that I love.

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

1 posted 2005-08-07 12:06 PM

i like this a lot. very discriptive without using a lot of words.

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

2 posted 2005-08-07 04:43 PM

Reminds of a lot of things

Good words

Bodger

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