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she'll_be_apples
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since 2005-07-11
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0 posted 2005-08-03 05:25 PM


Subtle visitor
Come sit with me

Stay with me a while

(Everyday)

Bring with you
Your voice
And
Sing to me

Your poetry

Open your eyes
To the sea

Look at how the
Waves
R e a c h  for you


Feel

Me

At your fingertips


© Copyright 2005 she'll_be_apples - All Rights Reserved
Greeneyes
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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2005-08-03 05:29 PM


Welcome....this is a wonderful entry to the blue pages....look forward to more!

In your light I learn how to love
In your beauty how to make poems
You dance inside my chest where
no one sees you and that sight becomes this art

Bodger
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Tolerance for a short time
2 posted 2005-08-03 07:11 PM


You give a fraction of talent

Give some more

Bodger

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-08-03 07:22 PM


Wonderful entrance post!
Welcome, and I look forward to more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2005-08-03 07:33 PM


beautiful first post! welcome to Pip! Please check your email for a special greeting
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-08-03 09:26 PM


I'll ditto Bodger...

give us more, at your leisure!

Lovely!

Welcome to Passions!

"There's a reason they call God The Creator - he sides with talent." Julia Cameron

Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07
Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good
6 posted 2005-08-03 11:20 PM


Welcome to PIPs and congrats on a great first post. I will be looking forward to reading more of your work.
Goldenrose
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7 posted 2005-08-04 07:37 AM


A good start here..welcome to passions..

Goldenrose.

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Susan Caldwell
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Florida
8 posted 2005-08-04 08:54 AM


  Welcome!!!

I feel, and hope you will be back with more!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
9 posted 2005-08-04 10:24 AM



Welcome to the Passion~

There is something that feels so familiar about your penning~

I do hope that in time we will come to know more about you through the writing you share and the replies you leave~

Enjoy your stay~

Nice post~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
10 posted 2005-08-04 12:17 PM


This was so toching !!! by the way your pen name is very Australian

Hope

Dark Angel
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11 posted 2005-08-04 04:51 PM


" by the way your pen name is very Australian "

Indeed it is!

~i want for myself your trembling~

muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
12 posted 2005-08-05 12:41 PM


very nice, subtle...soothing
Corinne
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state of confusion
13 posted 2005-08-05 03:32 PM


A very nice first post.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.
Cute screen name, too!


Corinne

she'll_be_apples
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14 posted 2005-08-05 04:30 PM


Thank you Muchly Folks



~peace~

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Gaia
15 posted 2005-08-05 06:26 PM


what a cool way to enter this land of poetry!
enjoyed this very much


WELCOME!

Ratleader
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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
16 posted 2005-08-08 12:57 PM


I'm getting used to reading good poetry from our new members....but it's rare to find one so breathtakingly beautiful as this. Unless the roof falls in on me, I'm going to read every word you post.

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
17 posted 2005-08-08 07:55 AM


beautiful, and welcome.
LeeJ
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18 posted 2005-08-08 08:06 AM


the waves reach with an infinate transformation...

Lovely and Welcome to Passions!

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