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0 posted 2005-07-31 08:05 PM



Like a robin perched in a tree,
It sang its lovely melody,

Quietly approaching like a white dove,
Whispering into my ear its love,

Fully aware of its charm and spell,
It rang loudly my heart’s love bell,

Falling for it one more time,
This time it had me in its chime,

Couldn’t do much but play along,
Accompanying it singing the song,

Through the drama of it all,
It leaves me here to fall,

How did I come to know it all?
Now that I think of it,
I can’t quite recall.



I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

© Copyright 2005 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-07-31 08:24 PM


enjoyed the read
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2005-07-31 09:02 PM


Oh I really enjoyed this one!
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

Xeonox
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3 posted 2005-07-31 10:33 PM


Thanks

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

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4 posted 2005-08-03 03:52 PM


I really love this.  
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5 posted 2005-08-06 02:34 PM


cute. it is funny how we get those thoughts. i have a grasp of what you are talking about
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6 posted 2005-08-06 02:42 PM


lol, those little birdies get around
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