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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-07-31 10:13 AM

To slow dance with you
until the sun slips the halo
off the marquise moon,
to be the window
to the oceans view,
to mirror footprints
for the sky's design,
and court the morning
as the stars recline,
to slowdance with you,
before the waking world
reminds.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

1 posted 2005-07-31 10:16 AM

Very nice. I enjoyed reading this.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2005-07-31 12:39 PM

This was so romantic and enchanting

Hope

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-07-31 12:42 PM

beautifully done!

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

4 posted 2005-07-31 03:58 PM

beautiful, the words dancing in this..loved this

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2005-07-31 04:41 PM

Dayem, I wish I had written this...sigh

Just Beautiful Ms Ink

a

for me

Mxx

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

6 posted 2005-07-31 07:10 PM

anytime given the chance I will always slowdance with you.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2005-07-31 07:11 PM

This read like a slow dance Michele..
Beautiful rhythm...lovely indeed.
Hugs~Nancy

Something tugs at me, I've no doubt of that.
Something from the sea, whichever one I'm near.
When I stray too far from beachland, it calls me back

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2005-07-31 07:58 PM

Beautiful, Michelle!

....jo

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2005-08-01 07:18 AM

ms inky..
long as there is a really long song playing,,,

enjoyed this lady

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2005-08-01 07:24 AM

Ummmm-Hummmm....there's something about those
slow dances. Huh, Michelle? Especially
"before the waking world reminds"....
Beautiful writing, dear lady.
Hugs,
Ethel

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

11 posted 2005-08-01 07:50 AM

Having two left feet,
He was awkward-
An ache on her toes,
The night thru-embarrased.
But by daylight,
Before the world woke
(To remind them this
Was only a dream)
From her he learned,
Slow dance steps.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

12 posted 2005-08-01 07:54 AM

Every word of this is just... perfect. Stunning and amazing.
Wow...

Always, Alyssa

Hupomeno.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

13 posted 2005-08-01 08:19 AM

gosh, what a great feeling this gives the reader...I want to go where your going, I won't bother, you won't even know I'm there...but it sounds so nice...comfy and full of life...hey, does he have a brother?
hehe

this was amazing

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

14 posted 2005-08-01 08:20 AM

thanks for taking the time to dance with me
guys and dolls

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

15 posted 2005-08-01 08:03 PM

Oh geez Michele, this is beautiful, I really needed this, it is lovely.

Can be seen from so many angles . . .
I LOVE this.

J. K. Mitchell
Member

since 2002-01-12

Posts 311
GA

16 posted 2005-08-03 03:29 PM

Wonderfully done!

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