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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2005-07-28 09:15 PM



Small Thoughts

To have you reign
there
where the need
cries out

to catch me in a
flush of warm myst

edging me
down memory lane
where
second thoughts
are never
and the challenge
is the bending of reality

bringing you
to me~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2005-07-28 09:30 PM


this is perfection....understand this well...
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2 posted 2005-07-28 09:59 PM


Your style seems to be changing of late, and it suits you well Maureen.  Lovely write.
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3 posted 2005-08-16 11:34 AM


thought this should be given another look ...


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4 posted 2005-08-16 11:44 AM


these are truly words of love...enlightening...very much enjoyed
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5 posted 2005-08-16 02:30 PM


M, I love that reality bending image, it suits my mood well this morning.
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6 posted 2005-08-16 03:48 PM


I enjoy reading ALL the thoughts that you express through your poetry! Big and "small"!


EA

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7 posted 2005-08-16 03:55 PM


Much enjoyed, Maureen!   ......jo
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2005-08-16 03:58 PM


thank you Craig, for  reviving this one...

life is a bit distressing right now and I don't think I have much positiveness to add  to this site at the moment...

thanks everyone

M

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9 posted 2005-08-16 05:19 PM


M, you got it in you

you know where I am *hugs*

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10 posted 2005-08-16 09:01 PM


There is something about small thoughts
And brief expression,
Emotion do not lack
In few words

Gloom

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11 posted 2005-08-16 09:18 PM


Gosh I love how your ease of words flow across the page. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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12 posted 2005-08-17 12:36 PM


Maureen, I love to read your thoughts. Even
your "small thoughts" are very enjoyable to
read. thank you.
Hugs,

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13 posted 2005-08-17 01:10 AM


Maureen...Beautiful words and thoughts. Thanks for sharing...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2005-08-17 10:35 AM


I thank each of you again..sometimes small thoughts are all I have


M

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